KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty nine"If you didn't get in trouble, what happened?" Kyra asked with a small curious smirk.KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty nine by comiKazzie
Rue returned the smirk and looked down, trying to hide the fact that she was blushing. When Kyra felt Rue's energy change, she gasped and struck Rue in the arm.
"You bitch! Why didn't you tell me you were attracted to Elder Warwick?!"
"Because it's Elder Warwick!" Rue said, emphasizing his name. "Last thing I need is you two assholes teasing me about it. Especially Dante." she added playfully.
"Oh this is GOLD." Kyra burst out laughing. "You're never going to live this down, my friend, this is too good."
"And just like that, I hate you." Rue laughed, covering her flushed face.
"Oh come on, Rue, you're acting as if you don't have a chance." Kyra scoffed lightheartedly, giving her a shove. "I see how he looks at you. I think you should go for him."
Rue rolled her eyes and stood up to brush her pants off. "Pretty sure I'd make an ass out of myself for even
KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty eightRue's heart was in her throat when she glanced at her friend with worry and then followed the Elder out onto a small balcony. Preparing herself for the scolding of a lifetime, she became nervous and confused when a smile crept onto the Elder's face.KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty eight by comiKazzie
"I honestly can't recall the last time I saw someone put an Elder in their place, aside from the Great Elder himself." he laughed.
"It is my duty to reprimand those who disrespect an Elder but some Elders just have it coming. If you didn't say something to Elder Knowles and I found out what he had said to her, I surely would have said something myself. He was out of line." he stated more seriously now.
"Believe me, I would never think to disrespect an Elder but I felt he went too far." she explained, starting to relax a bit. "Kyra...she's had enough of all the looks and whispers and I knew she was going to defend herself right then and there but I didn't want to see her get in trouble so I told her I would take the f
KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty seven"Az...how is this possible?" she breathed, turning her hand over just watching the energy radiate from her hands.KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty seven by comiKazzie
"I-I don't know." He said in awe. "You and I are the first human and Burillian to ever Bond. My energy is now yours as well. Although we share it, this is completely unexpected." he laughed.
"This is badass!" Geek laughed, making the energy flare more.
"This is actually quite scary." Astrum quipped, earning him a punch to the chest.
"Dick!" she laughed.
He roughly pulled her into a hug, causing her to squeal delightfully, as he rolled them over on the bed so he could lay on top of her while being propped up on his elbows. He brushed the hair out of her face as he leaned down to brush his nose against hers and smiled at her before giving her another kiss.
Kyra had stayed with Rue when Dante and Elder Warwick left with the rest of the Protectors for the meeting.
Rue knew that Kyra was already getting anxious about not knowing what was being dis
KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty fiveShe put her arms around his neck and hugged him tight.KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty five by comiKazzie
"I have been waiting for this day to come." she smiled, her voice muffled by his neck.
"As have I." he replied lovingly as he slipped his arms around her and laid on top of her. He then rolled off her and went to shut the curtains before slipping his shirt off.
He resumed his place on the bed, kneeling over Geek and kissed her once more. She paused with a sudden realization and stopped him.
"Wait, isn't this a sacred building? Wouldn't it be wrong to mess around in here?" she asked.
Astrum couldn't help but laugh. "We are not religious people, we don't believe in a deity and therefore don't treat this building as if you humans would a church. Although we honor and respect each other, being intimate in the Monastery is not looked down upon. The children are on the other side of the building for a reason." he stated. "The Elders
KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty fourAstrum got off the bed and leaned down to nuzzle his forehead on hers lovingly as he ran his hands down her slender shoulders.KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty four by comiKazzie
"I know I've made a few bad decisions since this whole thing started but you have to trust me this time. You may still be learning about my culture but from what you've seen with you're own eyes, you know the Protectors are a force to be reckoned with. They do not fall and they will never fail; it has been that way for a millennium." he explained.
"Luka is insignificant in their presence and he knows it." he added with a smirk.
"But wouldn't that make him that much more desperate?" she asked.
"It might but as powerful as he may think he and his men are, they don't have a chance against all twelve of the Elders."
"I'll take your word for it, Az. I trust you; I'm just scared for you." she said, understanding his effort to relieve her worries. "But don't you dare think
KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty threeAstrum happened to find Switch sitting on the steps on the balcony leading up to the Main Hall of the Monastery and briefly told him what had been discussed. The young Blue immediately insisted on helping but it wasn't Astrum's call to make. He would have to talk to Elder Warwick and Dante about it.KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty three by comiKazzie
"Where is Nelle?" Astrum asked, somewhat worried.
"She went to your room. The unwanted attention she's getting is ridiculous. I thought I had it rough." he mumbled. "When this is all over, I think it's only fair that we leave again, she can't stay here. Not with this shit." he added.
Astrum smiled at his little brother's compassion for Geek, feeling appreciative of his acceptance of her. "We will discuss our options when the time comes but for now I must speak to her about what is happening." he stated. "She wont like this." he sighed, patting Switch on the shoulder before walking up the stairs.
"Maybe you should put some armor on before telli
KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty twoElder Ramsey was a much older female Burillian with long white hair that had rows of braids along the sides of her head and pulled up into a pony tail in the back. She also had tattoos on her face that was made up of elegant symbols of their language along her left eye.KRU - Chapter eight - page twenty two by comiKazzie
"He must still be in the building. It wouldn't make sense to leave just to make a recording." Elder Murdoch, a male Elder who was closer to middle aged, piped up. "Nero was the only one who could get close enough to see inside without being detected and he could only scope the main part of the building. He could only confirm the location of the machine."
"Assuming Luka wasn't in the building at the time, I believe it's safe to say that he is there now. I would imagine he would be rallying up his troops while waiting for the Empire to retaliate." Astrum stated.
"Either way, we are out of time. The Empire will be here in a matter of days and we must take this into our own hands. &
KRU, story, characters, Burillians and Korithians © Karie Krezel
KRU Chapter one - page one A military cargo ship cut through the misty clouds, blending in with the dull grey sky. Now responsible for the payload that was strapped down in crates inside the cargo bay, the crew of Korithium Retrieval Unit specialists made their way to the designated base for processing. With more than a few lives hanging in the balance and a paycheck to set them for life waiting at the end of the mission last thing they expected was a mutiny. Last one they thought to instigate the mutiny was their own Commanding officer. There he stood though, a look more serious then they had ever seen on his face.
This is only a rough draft, I'm just getting all my ideas down in writing and then I'll go back and fix it. C:
Up to date: +9026 words
One-shots: 8932 words
Goal: 120 000 words / 480 pages - NAILED IT!!
KRU: Red origins - Chapter One - page oneThe large tent in the middle of the military base was alive with celebration as more and more soldiers poured in from their posts. Soldiers from all divisions mingled and drank as music could be heard echoing off the mountains for miles. Their mission was a success and they were scheduled to pull out in the morning.KRU: Red origins - Chapter One - page one by comiKazzie
A young male Red in a aviator jumpsuit stepped out of the tent for a moment of fresh air. He had spent the last two hours downing well deserved drinks as he hung out with fellow pilots and introducing his new wingman to the lot. He had recently been promoted and was given the opportunity to train the newbies. Although he had only been in the Air Force for a few years, he was already making a name for himself. His cocky attitude didn't go unnoticed, however.
The Red finished his beer and crunched the can before tossing it into the large bin outside the door. As he turned to walk back in, a group of infantrymen were making their way o
Prequel to KRU.
KRU:RO, story, characters, and Burillians © Karie Krezel
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Goal: 80 000 words
|What are your characters?|
They are Burillian, an original species created by me.
Are they fan characters of (insert game/show/movie/comic)?
Are they aquatic? The blue ones look aquatic.
No. Their skin is soft and non-slimy, just like ours. They don't have gills or fins. Just no.
How did you come up with them?
This explains a little about the process of how I came up with them. Astrum was the first Burillian created in December of 2011. The rest of the characters soon followed. The whole process lasted over 5 months before I finally became satisfied with the design.
Why are there red, blue, green and purple ones?
Burillians have 4 races; red, blue, green and purple. Each race is born in a different region on their planet and each race are given specific jobs. Reds are the more physical race. They make up the military, physical labor, grunt work, etc. Blues are the more intellectual race. They make up the teachers, the scientists, doctors, etc. They are assigned the jobs that require a higher academic level. Greens are the caretakers, the farmers, the nurses, etc. They're the more gentle of the races. And finally, Purples are the "enlightened ones", the Elders of the species. They have a higher understanding of the energy that makes up their species and the universe. They spend their entire life training in combat and meditation and once they reach a certain age, they become an Elder on the council.
They also have slightly different features. The Blues have more rounded antenna/energy receptors and tail tips, Reds have more sharper ones, Greens have more sharper ones as well but they're slightly curved towards their head as well as a sharper tip on their tails, and Purples have angled ones that are slightly outward.
Females look slightly different than the males. They don't have patches on their skin and they have white hair.
Do they all have patches of another color on their skin?
Only the males.
What are the glowing things?
Those are the very life force of a Burillian. Burillians are very sensitive to the energy around them and are capable of using the energy as a defense mechanism. They can send out "shockwaves" of energy. Kind of like a bomb without the fiery destruction, just the force of the explosion. Hope that makes sense.
If the light dims, they are sick or dying. The light also reflects how they're feeling. It gets more intense as they get angrier/excited.
They are also capable of transferring their energy to another being to help heal them if they are sick or wounded.
If you were to touch them, it feels like their skin. Think of it as putting your finger over a flashlight, the light shines through. That's kind how it works except the light is coming from the inside of their body.
They also need the light to see in the dark because they have very poor night vision. Night time on their planet is our dusk, it doesn't go completely dark so they have no need for night vision.
Can you explain what they have on their heads and why they're there?
This ref explains everything.
Do they have any special abilities?
Yes, they have a few. Because they're so sensitive to energy, just by touching another being, they can feel that person's energy. They can tell with a simple touch of your skin if you're sick, how you're feeling emotionally, and can even tell if you're lying to them.
They can also use their energy to defend themselves by sending out shockwaves. They can be as small or as big as they please but the bigger it is, the more of a risk they take with their life.
What is their diet?
They are strictly carnivores. They can eat any kind of meat but they prefer fresh, raw, red meat. They're not fond of fish.
Are they part of your story K.R.U?
Yes, they are all the main characters and the story revolves around them.
Why do they have such small pupils?
Their pupils don't work like ours. They stay the same size, hence why they can't see in the dark. But they don't need to when they give off their own light.
How long do they live?
150 years on average.
How tall are they?
Males are between 5'5" and 6'5" and females are between 5'1" and 5'11". There are no physical abnormalities.
Are they an open species/Can I make one?
I'm sorry but no. Not until I legally copyright the species!
Why did you pick Red for your Bursona?
I'm not smart enough to be a Blue, I don't give enough of a shit to be a Green, and I'm not wise enough to be a Purple.
How many characters do you have currently?
49 characters so far. xD
Why do all your alien characters have human sounding names?
Honestly don't have the time to sit for hours coming up with weird-ass alien names that can't be pronounced for all my characters. I quite like the fact that they have names that we can relate to.
Still interested in knowing more? Feel free to ask! If you read all this, here's a cookie.
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from MONOARROW I love Astrum's face.
This is Linlin, a "fan baby" she made for Tuntun and Piccolo. I love this so much, he's so cute.
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Custom cover pages:
1. X-x-Nix-x-X = Switch and Az
2. Kipachie = Kyra and Geek
3. Thewickedbeast = Switch
4. Azzheasman = Az and Geek
5. Demonflames = Switch
6. Oneeyedcanine = Switch or Elder Warwick and Gunner
7. Badcowboy69 = Switch
8. CelineDGD = Astrum and Switch or the Protectors
9. Zoibird = Elder Warwick
10. Roseoffate45 = Switch
11. Sugarush14 = Switch
12. iLozzie =
13. xelanesque =
14. Chanree = Switch
15. Megan = ???
16. Ryan = ???
17. Me = Switch and Az
18. Me = Az and Geek
Character ref sheets/bio sheets/chara series
Luka Von Strouse
Viktor Von Strouse
Elder Jace Warwick
Elder Oren Ramsey
Elder Spike Murdoch
Elder Seth ____
Elder Ezra Rowland
Elder Milo ____
Elder Dax ____
Elder Sully ____
Nero (once known as Elder Neo Rowland)
Elder Matt Hawke
Elder Cybil Faust
Elder Remy Tobin
Current total: 50
Burillians ref sheet
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