KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty eightHis mount stood almost nine feet tall from the top of his head to the ground and he was well over twenty feet long because of his tail. He had green and white fur with black stripes and brilliant yellow eyes.KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty eight by comiKazzie
The creature gave Elder Warwick a big slobbery kiss by licking the side of his face which made him laugh. He then knocked the Elder down to the ground and nuzzled his forehead into Elder Warwick's chest while blowing air out of his big furry nose making little happy noises.
"Gunner, my old friend!" the Elder laughed, affectionately rubbing his cheek on the creatures long and wide snout. "How I've missed you."
When Nox and Ekko came down the steps, Gunner hopped on his front legs in excitement and went straight for Nox, giving Elder Warwick time to get back up.
"Oh no you don't, furball!" she laughed, holding down her long hair protectively but it was in vain when Gunner started to groom her as he purred. "Gunner!" she whined playfully.
Elder Warwick laughed
KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty sevenDante and Astrum had already geared up in their Burillian armor and had been waiting patiently for the others. They had also taken the liberty of bringing out equipment for the Protectors as they geared up.KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty seven by comiKazzie
Soon enough, the balcony became silent when Elder Warwick came out of the Main Hall in full armor. His team of eleven Protectors followed close behind him and formed into a line across the balcony and stood with their feet apart and their hands behind their backs. Their stance was flawless and the look of them alone would send their enemies running. The others stayed back near the entrance so they were out of the way as they watched the display in front of them in awe.
With six Protectors on one side and five on the other, Elder Warwick took a few paces forward away from the formation and reached for a small metal, cylinder device on his belt that could fit in the palm of his hand. It was attached to a neatly packed metal wire and a handle on the other
KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty sixElder Warwick finally fell asleep, curled up next to Rue who was also asleep now; both of them content in each other's company after they had talked and cuddled for a while and the Elder was grateful. He couldn't remember the last time he ever felt a connection with a female companion. He and Oren had slept together over the years but it was only to release pent up energy, there was no affection involved and that was what he was longing for now.KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty six by comiKazzie
As dawn approached, he was awakened by the brightness of the room as the suns rose over the mountain tops and shined right in through the window. He sat up and rubbed his face with a hand to wake himself up and he turned to look down at Rue for a moment and smiled at her. He leaned down and kissed her shoulder and ran a warm hand down her bare back.
"Rue?" he said gently as he rested his hand on her hip.
She stirred a little and mumbled but curled up tighter underneath the warm blan
KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty fourThe Elder unclipped his harness that was strapped over his chest which held the two swords on his back and shrugged them off. He then gently laid them down on a chair by the door. The room was still dark but it was dimly lit with his red and her yellow energy, creating an orange light whenever they got close together.KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty four by comiKazzie
"I apologize but I have no night clothes with me." he said as he took off his battle suit, revealing his fully tattooed body and black undershorts.
"No need for apologies." Rue said half-mindedly as she took in all his tattoos in awe.
Tattoos in their culture symbolized strength and were meant to be honored and respected. Only Elders were permitted to get them and only with the approval of the Great Elder because they were gained only through experience and wisdom. The Great Elder was also tattooed from head to toe as Elder Warwick was.
He laughed at her again and held out his hand to her. W
KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty threeThinking it was some kind of emergency, she rushed to the door. Ignoring the fact that she suddenly felt very underdressed in his presence as he was still dressed in his battle suit without the chest plate, she quickly asked "Elder Warwick, is something wrong?"KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty three by comiKazzie
"Everything is well, Miss Paige." he smiled, easing the Red's nerves a bit. "I've come to ask if you would like some company tonight." he stated, causing her to become even more nervous than before.
She froze at the comment for a second and then awkwardly moved her arm over her chest to point into her dark room behind her. "Company? In my room?" she asked with uncertainty and shock.
He chuckled at her and asked. "May I come in?"
"Ah!..Yes..of course!" she stammered, stepping out of the way to let him inside, inwardly smacking herself for being rude and moronic.
"I hope I didn't wake you?" he asked, turning to her as she closed the door behin
KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty twoAs the suns went down, the Monetary was still and quiet with a sense of unease. Everyone had went to their rooms for the night to get much needed sleep, however a handful of people were going to have a restless night.KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty two by comiKazzie
Elder Warwick was sitting on the balcony in the warm night air as he tried to meditate. He was constantly losing focus on clearing his mind due to the thoughts running through his head. A lot of burden and responsibilities rested on his shoulders and it was becoming quite heavy this night.
He let out a sigh and looked up at the stars.
"Great Elders past, grant me the strength to lead my people through this war. Help me protect my children and family." he said aloud.
Although Burillians didn't believe in a God, the Great Elders were thought of as powerful beings and it is said that their energy was among the stars. Only the Great Elder himself can sense that far out into the universe and for
KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty oneKyra couldn't say much to that because she knew he was right. Their friend died on that rock months ago but what upset Kyra the most was the fact that she didn't know how she felt about it. She should feel the same grief she felt when she stood at his grave after his funeral but now other emotions she felt buried the lingering grief, almost snuffing it out completely.KRU - Chapter eight - page thirty one by comiKazzie
Dante kissed her forehead and rested his cheek on the top of her head. "It'll be over soon, baby." he mumbled sadly as he rubbed her back. She rested her head on his chest and kept her arms around him but looked out into the room with a vacant expression, feeling Luka's energy inside her. 'No. It wont.' she thought.
After a moment of silence, he let her go. "So tell me." he stated, changing the mood. "What did I miss that was so amusing?" he asked.
Kyra burst out laughing. "Right, the Bond." she said to herself, shaking her head. "Rue is going to be pissed."
"She'll get over
KRU, story, characters, Burillians and Korithians © Karie Krezel
KRU Chapter one - page one A military cargo ship cut through the misty clouds, blending in with the dull grey sky. Now responsible for the payload that was strapped down in crates inside the cargo bay, the crew of Korithium Retrieval Unit specialists made their way to the designated base for processing. With more than a few lives hanging in the balance and a paycheck to set them for life waiting at the end of the mission last thing they expected was a mutiny. Last one they thought to instigate the mutiny was their own Commanding officer. There he stood though, a look more serious then they had ever seen on his face.
This is only a rough draft, I'm just getting all my ideas down in writing and then I'll go back and fix it. C:
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One-shots: 8932 words
Goal: 120 000 words / 480 pages - NAILED IT!!
KRU: Red origins - Chapter One - page oneThe large tent in the middle of the military base was alive with celebration as more and more soldiers poured in from their posts. Soldiers from all divisions mingled and drank as music could be heard echoing off the mountains for miles. Their mission was a success and they were scheduled to pull out in the morning.KRU: Red origins - Chapter One - page one by comiKazzie
A young male Red in a aviator jumpsuit stepped out of the tent for a moment of fresh air. He had spent the last two hours downing well deserved drinks as he hung out with fellow pilots and introducing his new wingman to the lot. He had recently been promoted and was given the opportunity to train the newbies. Although he had only been in the Air Force for a few years, he was already making a name for himself. His cocky attitude didn't go unnoticed, however.
The Red finished his beer and crunched the can before tossing it into the large bin outside the door. As he turned to walk back in, a group of infantrymen were making their way o
Prequel to KRU.
KRU:RO, story, characters, and Burillians © Karie Krezel
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|What are your characters?|
They are Burillian, an original species created by me.
Are they fan characters of (insert game/show/movie/comic)?
Are they aquatic? The blue ones look aquatic.
No. Their skin is soft and non-slimy, just like ours. They don't have gills or fins. Just no.
How did you come up with them?
This explains a little about the process of how I came up with them. Astrum was the first Burillian created in December of 2011. The rest of the characters soon followed. The whole process lasted over 5 months before I finally became satisfied with the design.
Why are there red, blue, green and purple ones?
Burillians have 4 races; red, blue, green and purple. Each race is born in a different region on their planet and each race are given specific jobs. Reds are the more physical race. They make up the military, physical labor, grunt work, etc. Blues are the more intellectual race. They make up the teachers, the scientists, doctors, etc. They are assigned the jobs that require a higher academic level. Greens are the caretakers, the farmers, the nurses, etc. They're the more gentle of the races. And finally, Purples are the "enlightened ones", the Elders of the species. They have a higher understanding of the energy that makes up their species and the universe. They spend their entire life training in combat and meditation and once they reach a certain age, they become an Elder on the council.
They also have slightly different features. The Blues have more rounded antenna/energy receptors and tail tips, Reds have more sharper ones, Greens have more sharper ones as well but they're slightly curved towards their head as well as a sharper tip on their tails, and Purples have angled ones that are slightly outward.
Females look slightly different than the males. They don't have patches on their skin and they have white hair.
Do they all have patches of another color on their skin?
Only the males.
What are the glowing things?
Those are the very life force of a Burillian. Burillians are very sensitive to the energy around them and are capable of using the energy as a defense mechanism. They can send out "shockwaves" of energy. Kind of like a bomb without the fiery destruction, just the force of the explosion. Hope that makes sense.
If the light dims, they are sick or dying. The light also reflects how they're feeling. It gets more intense as they get angrier/excited.
They are also capable of transferring their energy to another being to help heal them if they are sick or wounded.
If you were to touch them, it feels like their skin. Think of it as putting your finger over a flashlight, the light shines through. That's kind how it works except the light is coming from the inside of their body.
They also need the light to see in the dark because they have very poor night vision. Night time on their planet is our dusk, it doesn't go completely dark so they have no need for night vision.
Can you explain what they have on their heads and why they're there?
This ref explains everything.
Do they have any special abilities?
Yes, they have a few. Because they're so sensitive to energy, just by touching another being, they can feel that person's energy. They can tell with a simple touch of your skin if you're sick, how you're feeling emotionally, and can even tell if you're lying to them.
They can also use their energy to defend themselves by sending out shockwaves. They can be as small or as big as they please but the bigger it is, the more of a risk they take with their life.
What is their diet?
They are strictly carnivores. They can eat any kind of meat but they prefer fresh, raw, red meat. They're not fond of fish.
Are they part of your story K.R.U?
Yes, they are all the main characters and the story revolves around them.
Why do they have such small pupils?
Their pupils don't work like ours. They stay the same size, hence why they can't see in the dark. But they don't need to when they give off their own light.
How long do they live?
150 years on average.
How tall are they?
Males are between 5'5" and 6'5" and females are between 5'1" and 5'11". There are no physical abnormalities.
Are they an open species/Can I make one?
I'm sorry but no. Not until I legally copyright the species!
Why did you pick Red for your Bursona?
I'm not smart enough to be a Blue, I don't give enough of a shit to be a Green, and I'm not wise enough to be a Purple.
How many characters do you have currently?
49 characters so far. xD
Why do all your alien characters have human sounding names?
Honestly don't have the time to sit for hours coming up with weird-ass alien names that can't be pronounced for all my characters. I quite like the fact that they have names that we can relate to.
Still interested in knowing more? Feel free to ask! If you read all this, here's a cookie.
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Custom cover pages:
1. X-x-Nix-x-X = Switch and Az
2. Kipachie = Kyra and Geek
3. Thewickedbeast = Switch
4. Azzheasman = Az and Geek
5. Demonflames = Switch
6. Oneeyedcanine = Switch or Elder Warwick and Gunner
7. Badcowboy69 = Switch
8. CelineDGD = Astrum and Switch or the Protectors
9. Zoibird = Elder Warwick
10. Roseoffate45 = Switch
11. Sugarush14 = Switch
12. iLozzie =
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14. Chanree = Switch
15. Megan = ???
16. Ryan = ???
17. Me = Switch and Az
18. Me = Az and Geek
Character ref sheets/bio sheets/chara series
Luka Von Strouse
Viktor Von Strouse
Elder Jace Warwick
Elder Oren Ramsey
Elder Spike Murdoch
Elder Seth ____
Elder Ezra Rowland
Elder Milo ____
Elder Dax ____
Elder Sully ____
Nero (once known as Elder Neo Rowland)
Elder Matt Hawke
Elder Cybil Faust
Elder Remy Tobin
Current total: 50
Burillians ref sheet
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