Retribution: part four *SPOILER*The crowd slowly dwindled as everyone went back inside the Monastery with a sense of satisfaction. Dante was still holding Kyra as they seemed to be the only ones grieving for Luka. Elder Warwick stood by Luka's body, as it was tradition to leave the body where it lay for the loved ones to come say their goodbyes before it was taken away and burned. The bodies were treated with respect no matter what they were charged for. Once they were dead, they suffered the consequences of their actions and were equal with the universe once more.Retribution: part four *SPOILER* by comiKazzie
Not being able to stand the sight of Luka's body anymore, Astrum left as well to seek out Geek and Switch followed closely behind. They both glanced at Dante and Kyra as they walked by, giving them an apologetic look. They weren't proud of what they had to do but everyone knew it had to be done; including Dante.
Once they were alone, aside from Elder Warwick, Kyra let Dante go and walked toward Luka. She was full o
Retribution: part three *SPOILER*Luka started grunting and clenched his teeth, resisting the urge to scream again but the pain became unbearable and he couldn't hold back anymore when the tears rolled down his bloody cheeks.Retribution: part three *SPOILER* by comiKazzie
Kyra began to cry for the man who treated her like garbage but loved her like no other woman in his life and only showed her the way he knew how. She cried for the man she fought beside for two decades; who she saved by using herself as a shield against a large blast, scarring half her body and tail. Who helped her achieve everything she had in one way or another. She knew a side of Luka that only one other person knew and Dante's reactions to Luka's screams confirmed that he was that other person.
"Dante.." she sobbed, clenching on to his shirt.
"There's nothing we can do for him now." Dante said quietly, holding back his own tears. "He brought this on himself."
Astrum finished quickly, having mixed feelings about torturing another being like that. He may have gotten
Retribution: part two *SPOILER*Kyra flinched every time Luka got hit and her emotions began to get the best of her. She and Dante never made a sound as the crowd was yelling and whooping as Luka continued to get beat down.Retribution: part two *SPOILER* by comiKazzie
A punch to the jaw and face, again and again, one to the stomach, one to the side, one to the ribs, Astrum and Switch both raged as they teamed up and dished out what they felt Luka deserved for a long time. Luka's blood splattered all over the ground as it flew from his mouth and nose. Stumbling and spinning around by the force of each hit. The brothers beat Luka senseless until they couldn't keep their arms up anymore and Luka could barely stand.
They both stopped, chests heaving from being out of breath, and Luka spit out the blood that was in his mouth as he regained his balance after stumbling a bit. Astrum looked over at Elder Warwick and held out his hand. Gracefully as always the Elder pulled out one of his long swords and placed it in Astrum's hand.
Retribution: part one *SPOILER*Kyra held onto Dante tightly as they stood at the front of the crowd that had gathered in the Monastery courtyard. Luka had finally been caught and arrested by the Protectors and was brought to the Elders to face the consequences of his actions.Retribution: part one *SPOILER* by comiKazzie
Switch, Astrum, and Elder Warwick were the only ones, besides Luka, within the center of the circle of angry Burillians seeking justice for Luka's treason. Luka stood with his arms bound behind his back with energy resistant cuffs on his wrists; much like the ones Astrum wore. His face was emotionless and cold as always.
Elder Warwick kicked the back of Luka's legs to force him down on his knees and walked in front of him to announce the Council's decision of his punishment. Kyra and Dante were the only ones in the crowd who were upset more than full of rage and vengeance like the others. They both knew what was coming and their stomachs were in knots.
Luka already looked worse for wear as the radiation was taking
KRU - Chapter eight - page ??? *Spoiler*Astrum ran into the room just as the giant fireball from the explosion roared passed the window where Switch stood and felt the entire building shake.KRU - Chapter eight - page ??? *Spoiler* by comiKazzie
Switch didn't move or even flinch at the quake that ripped through the half destroyed building as large chunks of concrete fell all around him. He stood completely still, looking blankly at the wall as blood dripped from his right hand. Astrum cautiously walked up beside him and put a comforting hand on his shoulder.
Switch didn't look at him or say a word, he just walked back out of the building with Astrum close behind. He found Teaka again and dropped to his knees where her body lay. The area was now dead silent as burnt bodies lay all around the building and vehicles were over turned and on fire. Both Teaka and Nico were far enough away from the explosion and were untouched.
A part of Switch felt like laying next to her and giving up but the other part of him wanted to see the world burn for taking her f
KRU - Chapter eight - page ??? *Spoiler*"NO! LET ME GO!" Switch raged hysterically as he tried everything in his power to run to her but Astrum kept his grip on his brother firm as he pulled Switch out of the line of fire.KRU - Chapter eight - page ??? *Spoiler* by comiKazzie
"I CAN HEAL HER! PLEASE!" he said angrily as tears ran down his cheeks. "WHY WONT YOU LET ME HELP HER?!" he asked as his energy exploded.
"She's gone, Darian! You'll only get yourself killed!" Astrum yelled, holding back his own emotions as Switch continued to get loose.
"No, no, NO!! TEAKA!!" Switch cried as he kicked to try and jerk himself out of Astrum's arms. Switch's back was against Astrum's chest as Astrum held Switch in a tight bear hug as he ran to get them to safety.
"PUT ME THE FUCK DOWN!! ASTRUM! WE CAN STILL HELP HER, DAMMIT!" he roared.
They both hit the ground as they took cover but Astrum still held on to his brother. "I'm so sorry Darian." Astrum said with sorrow, trying to calm his brother down.
Astrum let Switch go and pulled him into a hug.
KRU - Chapter eight - page ??? *Spoiler*It seemed like Astrum, Switch, Nico, and Teaka were all caught in the middle of the chaos as they all stuck together to fight off the Empire's soldiers, trying to get Dante and Elder Warwick back.KRU - Chapter eight - page ??? *Spoiler* by comiKazzie
The Empire's soldiers were not only equipped with heavy machinery but they carried specialized collars to restrain any Burillian they were close enough to put the collars on. They acted just like the restraints that restricted the use of energy so Astrum and Switch had to pay close attention and watch each other's backs so they wouldn't be caught. The soldiers were targeting any Burillian showing signs of radiation and were executing them.
When all four were caught out in the middle of the battlefield, surrounded by newly destroyed buildings from gunfire and explosions, they ran for cover as Nico stayed at the back of the group to fight off any soldier who should try to get the best of them. He fired off a few rounds at anything that moved to keep the soldiers at bay but lit
KRU - Chapter eight - page oneIt seemed as if more alarmed Burillians poured out onto the balcony, wondering what the source of the powerful energy was. Among the crowd, Kyra was one of them and was also curious but somewhat nervous, herself. She was soon joined by Dante as he hastily made his way outside to see what was happening. He found her and leaned up against her to take his weight off his healing leg.KRU - Chapter eight - page one by comiKazzie
Meanwhile, Geek hesitantly stayed behind on the balcony with Elder Warwick as Astrum took Switch out into the field for some privacy, now that there was a large crowd.
She looked up at the Elder who tried to keep a stern face but there was a slight hint of sadness as he watched the Wronen brothers. He has seen many children lose their family from war and it never gets any easier.
"What happened, Elder Warwick?" Geek asked timidly.
"It is not my place to discuss such intimate information with you." he stated with a harsh tone, not bothering to look at her.
She was slightly taken ab
KRU, story, characters, Burillians and Korithians © Karie Krezel
KRU Chapter one - page one A military cargo ship cut through the misty clouds, blending in with the dull grey sky. Now responsible for the payload that was strapped down in crates inside the cargo bay, the crew of Korithium Retrieval Unit specialists made their way to the designated base for processing. With more than a few lives hanging in the balance and a paycheck to set them for life waiting at the end of the mission last thing they expected was a mutiny. Last one they thought to instigate the mutiny was their own Commanding officer. There he stood though, a look more serious then they had ever seen on his face.
This is only a rough draft, I'm just getting all my ideas down in writing and then I'll go back and fix it. C:
Up to date: 8048 words left!!
Goal: 120 000 words / 480 pages
KRU: Red origins - Chapter One - page oneThe large tent in the middle of the military base was alive with celebration as more and more soldiers poured in from their posts. Soldiers from all divisions mingled and drank as music could be heard echoing off the mountains for miles. Their mission was a success and they were scheduled to pull out in the morning.KRU: Red origins - Chapter One - page one by comiKazzie
A young male Red in a aviator jumpsuit stepped out of the tent for a moment of fresh air. He had spent the last two hours downing well deserved drinks as he hung out with fellow pilots and introducing his new wingman to the lot. He had recently been promoted and was given the opportunity to train the newbies. Although he had only been in the Air Force for a few years, he was already making a name for himself. His cocky attitude didn't go unnoticed, however.
The Red finished his beer and crunched the can before tossing it into the large bin outside the door. As he turned to walk back in, a group of infantrymen were making their way o
Prequel to KRU.
KRU:RO, story, characters, and Burillians © Karie Krezel
Up to date: 908 words
Goal: 80 000 words
|What are your characters?|
They are Burillian, an original species created by me.
Are they fan characters of (insert game/show/movie/comic)?
Are they aquatic? The blue ones look aquatic.
No. Their skin is soft and non-slimy, just like ours. They don't have gills or fins. Just no.
How did you come up with them?
This explains a little about the process of how I came up with them. Astrum was the first Burillian created in December of 2011. The rest of the characters soon followed. The whole process lasted over 5 months before I finally became satisfied with the design.
Why are there red, blue, green and purple ones?
Burillians have 4 races; red, blue, green and purple. Each race is born in a different region on their planet and each race are given specific jobs. Reds are the more physical race. They make up the military, physical labor, grunt work, etc. Blues are the more intellectual race. They make up the teachers, the scientists, doctors, etc. They are assigned the jobs that require a higher academic level. Greens are the caretakers, the farmers, the nurses, etc. They're the more gentle of the races. And finally, Purples are the "enlightened ones", the Elders of the species. They have a higher understanding of the energy that makes up their species and the universe. They spend their entire life training in combat and meditation and once they reach a certain age, they become an Elder on the council.
They also have slightly different features. The Blues have more rounded antenna/energy receptors and tail tips, Reds have more sharper ones, Greens have more sharper ones as well but they're slightly curved towards their head as well as a sharper tip on their tails, and Purples have angled ones that are slightly outward.
Females look slightly different than the males. They don't have patches on their skin and they have white hair.
Do they all have patches of another color on their skin?
Only the males.
What are the glowing things?
Those are the very life force of a Burillian. Burillians are very sensitive to the energy around them and are capable of using the energy as a defense mechanism. They can send out "shockwaves" of energy. Kind of like a bomb without the fiery destruction, just the force of the explosion. Hope that makes sense.
If the light dims, they are sick or dying. The light also reflects how they're feeling. It gets more intense as they get angrier/excited.
They are also capable of transferring their energy to another being to help heal them if they are sick or wounded.
If you were to touch them, it feels like their skin. Think of it as putting your finger over a flashlight, the light shines through. That's kind how it works except the light is coming from the inside of their body.
They also need the light to see in the dark because they have very poor night vision. Night time on their planet is our dusk, it doesn't go completely dark so they have no need for night vision.
Can you explain what they have on their heads and why they're there?
This ref explains everything.
Do they have any special abilities?
Yes, they have a few. Because they're so sensitive to energy, just by touching another being, they can feel that person's energy. They can tell with a simple touch of your skin if you're sick, how you're feeling emotionally, and can even tell if you're lying to them.
They can also use their energy to defend themselves by sending out shockwaves. They can be as small or as big as they please but the bigger it is, the more of a risk they take with their life.
What is their diet?
They are strictly carnivores. They can eat any kind of meat but they prefer fresh, raw, red meat. They're not fond of fish.
Are they part of your story K.R.U?
Yes, they are all the main characters and the story revolves around them.
Why do they have such small pupils?
Their pupils don't work like ours. They stay the same size, hence why they can't see in the dark. But they don't need to when they give off their own light.
How long do they live?
150 years on average.
How tall are they?
Males are between 5'5" and 6'5" and females are between 5'1" and 5'11". There are no physical abnormalities.
Are they an open species/Can I make one?
I'm sorry but no. Not until I legally copyright the species!
Why did you pick Red for your Bursona?
I'm not smart enough to be a Blue, I don't give enough of a shit to be a Green, and I'm not wise enough to be a Purple.
How many characters do you have currently?
44 characters so far. xD
Still interested in knowing more? Feel free to ask! If you read all this, here's a cookie.
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Why do I hide these comments?
Because they're fucking rude.
Please, respect the artist who went out of their way to create something new, even if it reminds you of something that's already been done before. EVERYTHING has already been done before. Those of us who like creating new designs don't need to hear it.
Seriously. People complain about the abundance of fanart on this site so don't go comparing original work to something that already exists like it IS fanart or just a rip off. It's insulting.
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